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The Untold Story- Poem by ~1337alicat:icon1337alicat:





Untie the truths that I hold dear to my heart,
The sandy beach,
the summer’s breeze,
the water rippling between our feet,
magnified by the sprinkle of the world’s tears.
Its joy to the beauty that it was witnessing that starless night.
Hand and hand,
side by side,
This is only my dreams delight.
Shadowed words
faceless hopes
unraveling paths
with the whispering grass.

Fall beckons me now,
the leaves turn to gold and fire red.
As the summer flame burnt out.
All that’s left are the memories,
as they haunt me in my dreams.
Was it what you wanted?
To have me torn at the seams.
Black is my color of choice now,
only to match my black heart.
The only question that remains is
          will
                 it
                     go
                          back
to the love that it had in the start?
©2005-2010 ~1337alicat
:icon1337alicat:

Author's Comments

this belongs with the untold story pictures. . .It kind of explains all of them. . .in a weird way that is
I'm open for any ways that would make it better, I know there are a couple of lines that throw it all out of wack. . . Iwould just like to hear what you have to say about it.

No matter what I do hope you enjoy it.

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:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
Awesome, very good representation of that feeling :)

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
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:icon1337alicat:
thank you. :hug:

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"Peace is but a shadow of death,
Desperate to forget its painful past..."
:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
you're welcome hun :cuddle:

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
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:iconnalini:
:worship: kickass work;)

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I believe in a long prolong derangment of the senses-JIM MORRISON
:icon1337alicat:
:hug:

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"Peace is but a shadow of death,
Desperate to forget its painful past..."
:icon1337alicat:
thank you, thank you, thank you. I'd like to think everyone for this :sniff: *covers mouth* great honer. . .
teehehe. thanks so much hun. :glomp: :smooch:

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"Peace is but a shadow of death,
Desperate to forget its painful past..."
:iconnalini:
lol. and the academy goes to*drumroll* your welcome..lovely work:nod:

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I believe in a long prolong derangment of the senses-JIM MORRISON
:icon1337alicat:
:D I'll :P you for that.

:hug: :cuddle: :hug: :cuddle: :hug: :cuddle:

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"Peace is but a shadow of death,
Desperate to forget its painful past..."
:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
Pleased to meet ya :handshake: :highfive: :hug:

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
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